Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:46 am   Reply with quote         

Just curious to see some things i should do differently in the future.
Not bitchin about votes but i just wanted to see some different takes on it

Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:52 am   Reply with quote         

Mon Jun 08, 2009 10:04 am   Reply with quote         

captainSMITTY11 wrote:

Just curious to see some things i should do differently in the future.
Not bitchin about votes but i just wanted to see some different takes on it

Well first make your explanation more clear and make sure you dont ask about on going contests...other than that ask away Capin'

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Mon Jun 08, 2009 10:38 am   Reply with quote         

Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:43 am   Reply with quote         

oops sorry guys thought i posted the link

there we go

Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:18 pm   Reply with quote         

There is a head in there.

Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:21 pm   Reply with quote         

but no boobs!

Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:21 pm   Reply with quote         

"There is a head in there"

hehe

Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:25 pm   Reply with quote         

TheShaman wrote:

but no boobs!

I don't know looks like he tried pass off these silicon implants as boobs

Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:26 pm   Reply with quote         

ok using Jerry's formula.

1. Execution... its 'OK'. Your shadow could use some work... mostly softening. It's too straight edge, so soften it and it should have little dips and divots like in the brick
2. Humor? nope.
3. Story. Poison.. no drinky!
4. Mood. not really. maybe if you put this in a lab with a mad scientist or summok would help with a mood and story.
5. Boobs... nope no boobs

added some depth & some extra in shadows. Not gonna try my #4 Mood tip

Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:34 pm   Reply with quote         

But why is the head in there?

Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:36 pm   Reply with quote         

Tesore wrote:

But why is the head in there?

To see if you were paying attention.

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Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:52 pm   Reply with quote         

I did... I did... !!!

have I won something?

Mon Jun 08, 2009 1:18 pm   Reply with quote         

(just kidding, .......... we love you Tes)

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Mon Jun 08, 2009 1:19 pm   Reply with quote         

Tesore-"have I won something? "

You see i had ordered a brand new boat for you...but the order must have got mixed up because i never got it

But here have a gordonk