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billtvshow
this is a really good first post, here's my pointers: The good: the blur to give the sense of motion at the top is very nice, the shadow on the bike at the bottom is very nice, seems very real. The bike on top is at a really good perspective, fits right in and is balanced well. The not so good: The cutouts are generally good (i.e. the treads on the wheel), but there is a little bit of what i call "leftovers" on some of the edges. Depending on what program you are using, there should be a way to clean up those edges. There is a defringe option in Photoshop that works pretty well. Look at the perspective of the bike at the top. The back wheel that is further away is sitting on a log that looks closer to the viewer than the log that the closer wheel is sitting on. It's kind of a paradox. But overall, this is a really good first effort. I'm glad to give you what ever help I can anytime.
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styson
cool
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velocity
This is my first post, so if you can give me any pointers let me know. I've enjoyed this site as a viewer for awhile now and I think it would be fun to eventually get to vote on some of the great stuff posted here.
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velocity
Thanks for the critique. I see what you are talking about and didn't really notice it before.
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by velocity
Created August 19, 2004
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