Overall, the poster looks quite good to me.

And I'm agreeing with eve, don't toss the arrow. It draws immediate attention to the essence of the presentation. Without it, the attention would be weakend and the information could be lost (considering that most people only take a quick glimpse of it, this is not what you want).

Some details maybe (but probably will be unnoticed by the regular viewers).

- 'Joe's café band' on the cup could use a little bending so it looks really printed on the cup

- Lost shadow from the glasses card on the bottom right corner of Richi's picture

- Fontstroking looks oké, maybe 1 pixel too thick, but no need to lose it.

But that's it, as I said looks pretty well to me .

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ps: I like the detail in the glasses where you magnified the picture a bit. Nice touch.

yeah, dont get rid of the arrow, just make it neater. it looks a little too hand drawn for the rest of the image

I'd have to agree with Eve.
Also...since i aint one of the experts but just a 'viewer'..
like we the people who "actually read" ads and posters and who are supposedly the target of said advertising would know anything.....
That is an ad I would glance at and never read.
The one hanging next it with big red bold print..I'll read.
I don't have time to hunt for the text..It needs to be bigger..it neeeds to be ON th poster and not in it.
the picture is secondary to the information you want to get across.
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Those would fit nicely on the front too.
I am waiting for that one.