Haaa! Thanks for the crickets! Now I feel more relax...
Nice work RR & vokaris!
If I have time, I'll try something... but I'm in a big rush this week. Sorry.
I think there's some distortions from the background that are too strong. I also think we need some very crisp & very small and thin 100% white highlights, and maybe less opacity on some of the present larger white details is better. Vokaris 1st version is going the right direction but in general, I feel it too flat... some parts can need a bit contrast. It is good to have some crisp details, but it can be good to have some of those details with soft or medium blur or more fading.
So now I think, from the nice work done, we need to pay attention to details one by one, to find the right look & adjustments to make it the more realistic possible.
So I hope I can play a bit on it later...