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Tijn
Location: The Netherlands, Tiel
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 Fri Jan 27, 2006 4:42 pm Reply with quote
Hello PSC members,
I played around a bit with creating planets in PS, because I liked it so much  and I followed a few tutorials. This is what I came up with:
I want to make a neat wallpaper of it, so I want to ask you for some feedback! Every (constructive) criticism is greatly appreciated!
Thanks in advance,
Tijn
p.s. Yes, you can click on it. So click.
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 5:17 pm Reply with quote
the planet part itself looks really cuel, but the big color flecks in the rings look odd. I would also make the rings bigger; they seem small for that size of planet. (And yes, people, I know that technically it doesn't matter how big they are, but it would still look better.)
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Tijn
Location: The Netherlands, Tiel
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 5:55 pm Reply with quote
mason4300 wrote: but the big color flecks in the rings look odd.
haha, actually those are juggling props! If you look closer, you can see little balls, clubs, rings, diabolo's, unicycles, etc flying around in the ring. I have a website about juggling, so I think (hope) that it's obvious to other jugglers.
I agree on the rings, I don't like them that much, they are a bit small indeed. Size does matter  I will make another one, because I already merged the layers and stuff  really bad from me, I know.
Anyway, thanks for your comment!
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j58roldan
Location: New Jersey
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 10:59 pm Reply with quote
There has to be a planet that looks like that somewhere. Except for the rings. Nice job!
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 11:02 pm Reply with quote
hmm...when its small, you can't really tell, but if you can see it when its full size, thats fine then. Juggling's cuel. As for a planet looking like that somewhere, it actually reminded me most of a darkened photo of the sun, the close up kinds where you can see the sunspots and solar flares
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ScionShade
Location: VeniceFlaUS
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 11:04 pm Reply with quote
Nice image, why do the outer rings just fade out to nothing..
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Tijn
Location: The Netherlands, Tiel
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Sat Jan 28, 2006 7:15 am Reply with quote
Well, I just erased here and there, I didn't do it properly... I'll try to make better rings soon, you're right, they really suck atm 
mason4300 wrote: Juggling's cuel.
Yeap, I totally agree on that.
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splodge
Location: Yorkshire,
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Sat Jan 28, 2006 11:50 am Reply with quote
I tend to let the gods do all the heavy lifting and planet building stuff, I just do my best to populate them, then sit back, look pritty, and watch the fun 
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mikey
Location: Somerville MA
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Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:06 pm Reply with quote
Looks good overall" my advice would be to lighten it up more on the edge where the light hits it,  also add some stars in space around it" my 2 cents" 
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TheShaman
Location: Peaksville, Southeast of Disorder
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Thu Feb 09, 2006 10:34 am Reply with quote
nice job, but I agree with mikey... needs stars mabe even a sun somewhere out there top left
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splodge
Location: Yorkshire,
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Thu Feb 09, 2006 12:29 pm Reply with quote
the stars are there, but dont show at this compresion
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TheShaman
Location: Peaksville, Southeast of Disorder
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Thu Feb 09, 2006 12:48 pm Reply with quote
i see yours splodge (they are very light), but I was talkin about Tijn's
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TheShaman
Location: Peaksville, Southeast of Disorder
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Thu Feb 09, 2006 4:12 pm Reply with quote
solar voyager has to have some of THE BEST tuts for space themes. It helped me alot in that area for sure!
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