| Looks better big. Feedback on how to improve this would be most appreciated. kthnxbai |
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Salvezza
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bigbuck
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greeneyes
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Granulated
bizarre composition..great coach chopping though
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Less than Zero
Wow, some blue horsey's.. Overall this is a outstanding idea!!! (just drop the blue tint some) :)
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annajon
Sad to see the original horse colour gone lost in the chop, and the background could be less blurry, its a clear day, so you can see much further then
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Persuader
mnahahahahaha cool idea! ;D
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run2home93
pretty cool
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Martrex
My eye was drawn to the sharp edges of the school. The tone of the horses seems odd to the bus. Maybe because of the flat single tone of the yellow sign.
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Soze
cool idea Tofu.
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TheShaman
idea vote
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geeren
what everybody said...overall great idea
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marcoballistic
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caradeu
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Serps
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the burning couch
sure I got a few nit-picks but...good work otherwise .
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MindGraph
this is great tofu! not the fightink anytinks....hahaha
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digitalpharaoh
!!!!!!!!!!!!
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anabrin
Great!!
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zorro13
cool :)
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anfa
:)
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Tesore
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
i like the depth of feel to this your tree lines have a tad bit of a sharp line though in some spots. its a funny idea nun the less ;)
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Tarmac
i think i would prefer to see a gradual feathered DOF blur heading back towards the school house, rather than a sharp/blur contrast, otherwise great work tofu .. !
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Janfet
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Govan
;-)
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Dead Man
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Claf
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Salvezza
The trees seem just a little too blurry, and the sky could be a bit sunnier looking..
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TofuTheGreat
Thanks for the feedback Sal! I'm headed out of town for the day so I'll have to edit when I get back tonight. Keep the tips coming people! I'm trying to get better here! :-)
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TofuTheGreat
Odd. I don't see blue horses. This is the third monitor I've look at them on. 2 LCDs and 1 CRT. I'm home now so I'll see what I can do to implement suggestions tonight. :-)
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TofuTheGreat
I've looked all over and I can't find my PSD. :-( Crappit.
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TofuTheGreat
HA! Found the PSD finally. Tried to figure out how I got blue horses and couldn't so I tried recoloring them. Coach looks washed out now. Tips?
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JClark8220
You have the steps leading up to no door. Isn't that a vehicle violation? What you wrote up on top of the bus is very insulting to any Amish.
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TofuTheGreat
Good eye on the steps. Didn't see that (obviously). As for the slogan why would it be insulting? I LIVE IN AMISH COUNTRY! I've talked with them. They have a sense of humor. They don't believe in fighting and many have Dutch and German accents.
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TofuTheGreat
Have YOU (Julie Clark) ever spoken with a member of the Amish faith?
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TofuTheGreat
Wow. I've gotten some fantastic feedback on this chop. It even did better than I hoped it would. I'm still going to edit this and ask for feedback. 8)
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TofuTheGreat
Big thanks to everyone but especially to Granulated for the advice on composition. What I learned from him never made it into this chop but won't be forgotten on future chops. :D
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Amish School Bus {Edit2}
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by TofuTheGreat
Created February 18, 2008
30 votes
10 comments
1280w x 960h (508KB)
1,735 views
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