| damdiedadiedadiedadiedadiedam a nice pool on the lower level of my house |
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Crowned
nice
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dumbat
great idea and you've done the design really well. i'd work on the shadows (by stairs), & tidy up the edges (by the pool (foreground left)), & the lighting of the lady & baby (unless that light is meant to be reflected from the support)
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vokaris
Agree with dumbat. The water looks flat and out of scale (more ripples perhaps) and since we can see the bottom of the pool - is the girl really 12 feet tall? The reflection of the diver is wrong. The perspective (or lack thereof) of the stairs...
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dumbat
also, shouldn't there be a massive plasma screen tv? :) hope you're ok with the critique. my fave bit of this image is the splashed water & footprints on the floor. very nicely done
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Grefix
love to get critique, it's what makes me drives :) Anyway, I was aware of most of the problems you both underlined and will work on these this evening (couldn't do it this weekend as I wasn't home) About the girls heigth, she's floating or
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Grefix
there's a footborder where she can keep herself straight ;) The lighting on both subjects in front was acompromise as the kid was lighted that way, that's the reason why I placed them near the post, to suggest it casting light. The reflection of the
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Grefix
man is actually a problem I haven't solved yet, pretty difficult as you should see his front, but I haven't found a ource wich was sufficient to fake this. So I faked it a bit bad at this time (as I didn't want it to have no reflection at all)
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Luxwiz
Whataya got one pool for hot water and the other for cold?That´s decadent
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Grefix
@luxwiz, no that's comfortable :)
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Grefix
yey, yet again I have pushed my limit!
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If I was a rich man
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by Grefix
Created September 10, 2006
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