| Updated. This first started off as a Perfume-ad, but in the last moment decided to leave the text. Source is used in various ways, like skin, eyes, border, etc... Pls go large |
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tadams
I like the elements and where you were going. However, I do think you went overboard on the skin. The nose is a black blob. Bring back the flesh, keep the eyes.
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kinetic_be
Thx for the tip. You're right, it had gotten too dark overall. I updated it, hope it's better now :)
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kinetic_be
Ah, I see what you mean Jasper about the diamonds. It's not a reflection, the bottle is supposed to be transparant and letting trough some of the background. Due the light in the bottle, the diamonds have gotten too bright. I'll see if I can fix this.
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ardanza
i look as an artist painter at this, i'am not so long doing ps, but if you can see this as a painting the job is great, the lights teh composition evrything one word a beauty, gives me the feeling if i look at the mona lisa
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jasper
ah - i see...not sure what the correct brightness would be in that case. it may even be distorted - depending if the bottle is empty or not. full bottles tend to flip the reflection vertically - try that along with a spherical distortion.
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kinetic_be
Got rid of the bottle's transparacy. Thx for tips guys.
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tadams
Good update. Nose area could still use some lighting touches.
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jasper
better!
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The scent of a woman
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by kinetic_be
Created March 24, 2008
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720w x 960h (249KB)
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