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marcoballistic
I did not mind your previous background, as you seem also to have some depth to it, now the depth is lost as both fore and backgrounds are in sharp focus, and lit intensely, this is ok as long as the background compliments the focal range.
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marcoballistic
Done quickly I have fiddled with the background intensity and depth here: [img] i21.photobucket.com...
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marcoballistic
then here I have equalised the intensity & tonal ranges to match so the woman is now not looking out of place within the image: [img] i21.photobucket.com...
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marcoballistic
finally introduced some subtle background tones in the light to match the womans tones, and some extra low and highlights to the woman: [img] i21.photobucket.com...
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marcoballistic
just an idea, as I like the previous version, this new background is nice, but right now, in my opinion does not compliment or work for the main part of your work. Although nobody else seems bothered too much ha ha ;oP ah well, just some tips :O)
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Eve
i think this works better. You're the creator...it's entirely up to you whether you think this enhances your image.
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marcoballistic
also something I failed to say in my original vote/comment as I was rushed, the leaf veins make for very good blemish and veins on the woman, you controlled them well in their placement.
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drknotter
@Marco: Thanks for the tips! I'll work on an update in a few. I fiddled a lot with getting the background to match the color tone of the foreground, but didn't even bother to try and match the foreground to the background!
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drknotter
@Marco: Tried to replicate what you did as best I could. Don't think I quite got it, but I still think it looks much better! Thanks again!
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marcoballistic
looking goood, glad I could help, now go forth and win :)
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Eve
Marco, yer grandstandin'...you twit. :P
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blue_lurker
any chance of a link to the original please
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marcoballistic
ha, I thought I was being gracious Eve
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marcoballistic
going to get accused of grandstandin' again no doubt lol, but seriously, shame this was not your opening win, U deserve 1 easily by now, & your ability 2 listen 2 advice & take what U want from that advice is admirable. Hope U win real soon. Great work.
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Autumn Model (Updt 2)
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by drknotter
Created December 07, 2008
36 votes
14 comments
1024w x 768h (431KB)
1,714 views
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