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kevin
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triponix
Few things to help sell realism: 1) Some slight reflection of the blind guy on the booth 2) shadow work inconsistent... blind guy and dog casting heavy shadow while booth and guy on toilet have too soft a shadow or none at all 3) cars a bit too crisp
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triponix
perhaps it is not the crispness of the red car that is off but the lack of reflections and sunlight variance compared to other cars
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XenoX101
Yes, the red car should have a reflection of the white car behind it. Also as well as blind man's reflection, the booth should also have the red car's reflection. Lastly the sign and doorway should be a lot brighter, since the reason they were dar
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XenoX101
dark was because the rest of the toilette was casting a shadow on it, since it is now see-through, the remeniscence of the toilette should be a lot brighter.
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XenoX101
Oh and one more thing, brighten up the blind guy and the dog, they seem a bit dark considering the brightness of the photo.
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jaysen
thx for all the comments, made some of the suggested changes; a reflection of the blind man on the booth, also lightened him and softened the shadow, some light changes on the cars too
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TofuTheGreat
Just noticed that my vote implied I'd seen this chop. Not so. I mean I saw an actual "see-thru" street-side toilet on either TV or the web not long ago. Nice changes jaysen.
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